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Use our AI-powered tool to brainstorm and refine your college application essay.
Remember: Use AI to assist your writing process, but always craft your essay in your own words and voice for an authentic application.
Brainstorm to final draft, a balanced school list, and a winning application strategy — guided by a Foley Admissions Pro, with AI doing the busywork. Standout applications without the private-counselor price tag.
Not sure where to begin? A quick consultation maps out the right package, timeline, and strategy for your student before you commit to anything.
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Dr. Ron Foley is an Independent Educational Consultant with 35+ years of experience guiding families through admissions. Our full-time, salaried team coaches every part of the application — essays, school-list strategy, interviews, and how to position a student's activities and résumé so the whole story adds up.
We pair that human expertise with an AI companion that drafts lists, timelines, and essay outlines at home, so session time goes to strategy and refinement — not paperwork. The result is a standout application built on data and authentic voice, not just narrative polishing.
Expert guidance through every stage of the application — not just essay editing.
Brainstorm to final polish with College Board approved AP Language teachers — idea generation, outlines, drafts, and edits that keep your authentic voice.
Build a balanced reach, match, and safety list tied to your goals, budget, and stats — so every application is one you'd be glad to attend.
Frame activities, résumé, and achievements into a coherent story, plus interview prep and scholarship targeting that strengthen the whole file.
An AI companion drafts lists, timelines, and outlines at home; a Foley Admissions Pro guides the strategy and reviews the work in session.
How the Human + AI model turns a long, stressful process into clear, manageable steps.
Use your AI companion to generate a starter school list, application timeline, and essay angles — so you arrive with material, not a blank page.
Meet 1-on-1 with a Foley Admissions Pro to refine the list, set a test and application timeline, and shape essay themes around your real story.
Revise essays draft by draft, prep interviews, target scholarships, and finalize a confident, cohesive application before each deadline.
The two pillars of a standout application, coached side by side.
Our College Board approved AP Language and Composition teachers help you craft compelling essays that showcase your unique voice.
Personalized guidance for college selection, application timelines, interviews, and scholarship opportunities.
Session details
Sessions are 1-on-1 for personalized attention. We recommend at least 5 sessions for best results. Please register 24 hours in advance and bring your own laptop.
Start early! Don't wait until the last minute — give yourself time to craft your best application.
Let an AI companion handle the busywork, then bring it to a Foley Admissions Pro for expert review.
Act as a top admissions strategist. My student is a rising 11th-grader interested in environmental engineering with a 3.7 UW GPA and a 1290 SAT (shooting for 1450+). We prefer colleges in the Mid-Atlantic or Midwest under $60k/year. Generate:
• 3 reach, 4 match, 3 safety schools (give reasons)
• month-by-month testing & application timeline
• 3 essay angle ideas tied to the student's wetlands-cleanup project
• list of need- and merit-based scholarships that fit these stats.
Copy → tweak → bring to your Foley session for expert review
See how our Human + AI model compares to traditional private counseling.
| Foley Prep | Traditional Private Counselor |
|---|---|
| 35+ years of expertise — Dr. Ron Foley is an Independent Educational Consultant with decades of admissions experience. | Often 3–5 years' experience; many rely on third-party essay editors. |
| Full-time, salaried team — Foley tutors coach essays, interviews, résumés, and college-list strategy. | Usually a solo practitioner. |
| Data-backed priorities — Strong test scores and authentic achievements, not just narrative polishing. | Heavy focus on "polishing" narratives — expensive and time-consuming. |
| Human + AI model — Free AI tools draft lists, timelines, and essay outlines → Foley expert review in one session. | 20–40 billable hours @ $400–$1,000/hour = $8k–$20k+. |
| Invest savings where they matter — More tutoring reps, subject mastery, or enriching experiences that stand out. | Budget blown on paperwork coaching. |
Sample essays from students who worked with our admissions team.
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Available in-person at any of our NJ centers or live-online. All coaching is 529 plan eligible.